Composition (obtative english class)

"Drugs and online games are two major forms of addiction for young people today"
Today a lot of young people like to spend their free time playing with online games with their computers. I think that isn't very bad for them because with most of games you can talk with anoter people and play in a same time , and including in some occasion tey are good for improve our habilities of attention.
but on the other hand I believe that if you spend more time with these games it can be bad for your health. Unfortunatell, some young people, maybe 12 to 15 years old are very addicted to this games and they become them in their second real life.
In this cases, the people lose their social life, and their friends, and usually downed their level in the school.
Another form of addiction to young people are the drugs, and they frecuently take them for fun, and because they think that if consumed these substances they can enjoy better their free time.
I think that these are a mortal substance, and drugs can be worse that the online games, because they can change all yourself and yourlife.
In conclusion I think that both of them are dangerous for ourselfes, you can play online games, of course, but not spending more of four hours in front of you PC playing. And about the drugs, the best is not to taste anything about that.